Hush, Oh planet

hey saturn i see your rings
bright amber coloured optical illusions
oh no, pluto,
do not whine
not a planet? no worries
i shall buy u a new pet
make the death of the last one
dissapate
replace replace - that which cannot be cured
come come little one
let me buy you a star on the rocky boulevard
oh venus, dear mars,
the sexes of the planet earth
exploit your innocence ..
fear not! you do not represent our loins
go back to sleep
hush baby hush
the lone astronaut whizzes past the moon
do you still believe NASA actually reached there?
another political cry for 'i need a shrink'
and yet and yet
oh tyranny thou art asleep
where are the dictators, the revolutions, the drugs
oh no oh no
now, hush my love
go back to sleep ..

Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:14 pm MST by ravengirl | Email Article |

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Interestingly sophisticated - I see the change in your style - Nice to know you're writing for yourself - rather than for someone . Someones growing up, Calcutta is benefical. Keep shining, Rock STAR. Love G

Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:22 am MST by Gaurab

Nice ... i see the tinge of hate for indias political system shining through .... me likes ...

Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:55 am MST by rahul

Varrrrrrry. lol, not smoking anything my friend. Sigh, come back na. =[[

Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:15 pm MST by Anonymous

what the hell have YOU been smoking? :P good piece. crazy, but nice. looks like u've been listenin to a lotta SOAD

Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:54 pm MST by ze duck

Heh, Thanks Saad. And Wired up, you've been watching too much MTV! Lol. DONT CALL ME DEVI. BLEURGH.

Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:31 pm MST by Anonymous

welcome back devi.

Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:30 pm MST by saad

did u purposely post this on sept 11th to fuck with my brains?? haha.. bloody yankssss.. i love this. i like the bit about pluto. nice to have u back, Raven. nice to have u back.

Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:25 pm MST by wired up

Hush, Oh planet

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